Thursday 7 June 2018

Profile


My name is Mahonri. I go to Riverdale School in Gisborne.
My goal for this year is to become the brainiest kid in Riverdale School
My goal is to get there at Reading. My goal for this year is to become a good rugby player. 
My goal for this year is also to become a good kid.

6 comments:

  1. I like your introduction mahonri

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  2. That's good Mahonri

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  3. Kia ora mahonri
    I really liked how you got a lot of goals that you should do.
    I learnt that i should do some of them.
    Maybe you could stop writing about your goals.
    Mā te wā

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  4. Kia ora, I am Bella from Ormond School.
    I really liked that you put what your goals and I really like that you want to be a good kid.
    I learnt that you have a lot of goals.
    Maybe you could put a little bit of information what you like to do and about what out you have learnt.
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog http://ormondbellaj.blogspot.com/2018/06/profile_11.html

    Mā te wā
    Bella


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  5. Kia Bella were you at Ormond School last week when we came over to play your rugby team?

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